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Band 4+: You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter, say which part-time course you booked explain why you need to cancel your booking ask about booking a different course

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Dear sir Or madam,

I am writing to letter about cancel my looked part time course, which I selected few days ago. It is computer design.

Few days before, I booked computer design course as part time. This course is selected by my brother suggestion.

I think in the future this course will not help me and also I am doing research about this course many bad feedback for this subject in addition, I have also realize don’t interest of this types of course. These was choosed by my mistake.

After many research and i found computer hacking course. This course selecting many reason, first of all, this course will help me in future. Secondly, I have intrest in this course. Thirdly it course will help me to find many jobs.

I hope you understand my mistake and change my parttime course.

Yours faithfully,

John.

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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course: 11

computer: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, but the explanation for cancellation could be more detailed and convincing. The request for a different course is clear. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, and the writing is disjointed. The numerous grammatical errors further hinder the coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. The vocabulary is not always precise or sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. These errors significantly affect the clarity and readability of the letter.

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