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Band 7+: You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter, say which part-time course you booked explain why you need to cancel your booking ask about booking a different course

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Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Ali Ammar, and I am a veterinarian, who graduated from your college. I booked a part-time course last month, and I am writing this letter to ask you to cancel this booking.

First, I booked a part-time course about internal medicine diseases in farm animals, which is supposed to provide online lectures and farm practice. In addition, participants acquire certificates that allow them to work in farms.

Secondly, I think that I will not be able to work for large animals’ farms although I am really passionate about these animals. Therefore, I want to cancel my booking.

Lastly, my friends advised me to apply for pet animals course, which I want to know more details about if you do not mind. I want to know about its duration, fees and content.

I am looking forward to hearing from you, and if there are any updates, please feel free to contact me.

Yours faithfully,

Ali Ammar

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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about: 4

course: 3

animals: 3

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Task Response

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing clear and concise information about the course cancellation and the request for information about a different course.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphs flow logically, and the ideas are presented in a clear and coherent manner.

Lexical Resource

7.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with some sophisticated choices. The language is generally accurate and appropriate for the context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

The letter contains a few minor grammatical errors, but these do not significantly hinder comprehension.

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