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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The diagram below shows a fire exit plan in a college accommodation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The image shows a fire exit plan diagram for a college accommodation with labeled rooms and directions for evacuation; Bedroom 1, 2, and 3 are accessible from the left side of the corridor with exits leading to Meeting point 1, a Staircase near Bedroom 1 and Bedroom 2, and Meeting point 2 beside Bedroom 3; Bedroom 4 and 5 are accessible from the top right side with a centrally located Lift and exit towards Meeting point 2; Bedroom 6 and 7 are on the bottom right, with Bedroom 7 having a direct exit to Meeting point 2 and Bedroom 6 connected to the Corridor.

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THIS PROCESS DIAGRAM ILLUSTRATES THE PRODUCING PROCESS OF COCONUT OIL.

OVERALL, THE PROCESS BEGINS HARVESTING THE COCONUT AND ENDS SHIPPING IT.

INITIALLY, IT COMMENCES WITH HARVESTING THE FRUIT FROM THE COCONUT TREES LİMİNG AFFECTS QUALİTY ALL OVER THE REGIONS WHERE IT IS AVALIABLE. THE FOLLOWING STAGE IS CONTINUED DEBUSKING THIS FRUIT.

AFTER THIS STAGE COCONUT IS GRATED IN THE SPECIAL DEVISE. İN THE NEXT STEP IT IS WEIGHED AND THEN DRYED UNDER THE SUNLIGHT IN ADEQUATE TEMPERATURE. MEANWHİLE, THIS PRODUCT IS PRESSED IN THE DEVISE NAMED HYDRATIC PRESS. THE PROCESS CONTUNIED WITH CLARIFYING COCONUT AND IT IS REMOVED THEIR IMPURITIES. AT THE RESULT OF THIS GAINED PROCUCT IS FILLTERED FOR A SUITABLE PERIOD. AFTER FILLTERING THE COCONUT OIL IS PREPARED BY PACKAGING, LABELLING AND DOING OTHER NECESSARY PROCEDURES AND PLANNED FOR SAIL AFTER SUCH A HEAVY PROCEDURE . AT THE END OF ALL ABOVE MENTIONED THE MANUFACTORİNG PROCESS IS FINISHED BY SHIPPING, MAY BE TO FOREIGN COUNTRIES OR DOMESTİC MARKET.

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Task Response

The report suffers from a fundamental mismatch between the task description and the content provided. While the task and the student's report describe a process for producing coconut oil, the visual description provided describes a fire exit plan for a college accommodation. Because the report is attempting to describe a process that is not present in the provided visual information (the fire exit plan), it fails to address the actual data provided. However, assuming the visual description is an error and the student was indeed looking at a coconut oil process diagram, the report still struggles with significant inaccuracies, spelling errors (e.g., 'liming', 'devise', 'contunied', 'sail'), and grammatical issues that impede clarity. To improve, ensure that your response directly relates to the provided visual data and focus on improving sentence structure and technical vocabulary related to the specific process being described.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical chronological order, which is appropriate for a process diagram. However, the cohesion is significantly hindered by awkward phrasing and incorrect transitional markers. For example, 'The following stage is continued debusking' is not a natural way to connect ideas. To improve, use a wider variety of cohesive devices such as 'Subsequently,' 'Following this,' or 'Once the [noun] has been [verb-ed].' Ensure that each sentence flows logically into the next without abrupt shifts in tone or structure.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use specific vocabulary related to the process (e.g., 'harvesting', 'grated', 'impurities'), but there are frequent spelling errors ('devisce', 'dryed', 'contunied', 'procuct', 'filltered', 'sail', 'manufacturіng') and word choice issues ('debusking', 'liming affects quality'). Additionally, the use of all capital letters is not standard for academic writing and can make the text harder to read. Focus on improving spelling accuracy and learning the correct collocations for manufacturing processes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report struggles with grammatical accuracy. There are several issues with sentence structure, such as run-on sentences and fragments (e.g., 'the coconut is grated in the special devise. In the next step...'). There are also errors in verb tense and voice (e.g., 'the process continued with clarifying coconut and it is removed their impurities'). To improve, practice using the passive voice, which is the standard for describing processes (e.g., 'The fruit is harvested' instead of 'It commences with harvesting'). Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and the correct use of prepositions.

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