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Band 7+: You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: • • Describe the situation • • Explain how you were helped • State what you are going to do as a result of this good experience

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding one of the staff who really helped me a lot during my last visit. I am new to this community and I was wondering about purchasing basic groceries and home needs.

Fortunately, as soon as I entered the supermarket, an employee whose name is Ramya approached me and asked exactly what I am looking for. I explained my situation and asked for her assistance in buying those products. She not only stayed with me almost for 1-hour but also guided me patiently on how to set up a new home with minimal things.

In this regard, I was completely moved by her gesture and her hospitality. I believe that such type of workers is much needed not only to enhance company’s growth but also to maintain a good relationship with the public. I would certainly share this good experience with my community members.

I am delighted to share this with you.

Yours sincerely,

P.Praveena

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

7.5

The letter appropriately addresses the task by describing the situation, explaining how the writer was helped, and stating what they are going to do as a result of the good experience. The content is mostly relevant, but it could have included more specific details about the assistance received.

Coherence & Cohesion

7.5

The message is easy to follow, and there is a good use of cohesive devices. The letter is well-organized into clear paragraphs. However, there are a few minor lapses in coherence and cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between the second and third paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

7.5

There is a wide range of vocabulary used accurately and appropriately. The writer demonstrates good control of lexical features, but there is room for more sophisticated and varied vocabulary to enhance the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7.5

A wide range of grammatical structures is used with flexibility and control. Punctuation and grammar are mostly used appropriately throughout the letter. However, a few minor errors in punctuation and sentence structure could be addressed for further improvement.

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