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Band 4+: You work for an entertainment company which plans to open a new theatre soon. You want to invite a famous actor to open the new theatre. Write a letter to this famous actor. In your letter • give some information about the new theatre • invite her/him to open the new theatre • explain why she/he would be a good person to open the theatre

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Dear Marry Strip,

I am honered to extent the opening Adelaide theatre venue invitation to you. The Matchmaker company that I work for would be more than happy to count with your presence during the opening day that will occur end the 10th May 2026 for the Art’s internation day.

I do not want you give a massive spoiler of this lovely and cozy theatre but let me describe you a bit about this new venue. Building has three main rooms to deliver different performances at the same time, due to high quality noise isolation material also sits have been disigned to be more confortable than ever, so people can enjoy the piece of art with a high standard facilities.

My company would be honored to have you during the opening ceremony that will take place the same day that actors will performance one of your most important theatre piece in the 90’s. The opportunity of having you that day will definetely change the perspective and make more people interested to attent. Specially nowadays that has been challenging to convince society that theatre is a industry that is still alive.

Please let me know if you need me to organise anything from my end so you can feel more than welcome.

Kind Regards,

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

theatre: 4

opening: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately covers the task requirements by providing information about the new theatre, extending an invitation to the actor, and explaining why they would be a suitable person to open it. There are a few minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that could be improved. For example, 'honered to extent' should be 'honored to extend,' and 'count with your presence' could be rephrased for better clarity. Overall, the letter is well-organized and conveys the message effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider structuring your letter with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each focus on a specific point (information about the theatre, the invitation, and why the actor is a good fit), and a concise conclusion. Using transitional phrases can also help to connect your ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the sophistication needed to fully convey your message. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to theatre, entertainment, and invitations. For example, instead of 'happy to count with your presence,' you could say 'delighted to have your presence.' Also, be careful with spelling; 'honored' is misspelled.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that impede understanding. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, 'I am honered to extent the opening Adelaide theatre venue invitation to you' has multiple errors. Pay close attention to punctuation as well, as it is currently lacking.

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