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Band 7+: You work for an entertainment company which plans to open a new theatre soon. You want to invite a famous actor to open the new theatre. Write a letter to this famous actor. In your letter • give some information about the new theatre • invite her/him to open the new theatre • explain why she/he would be a good person to open the theatre

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Dear Madam,

I am writing this letter to invite you to the inauguration of our new theatre in Palanpur.

We already have a theatre in the city. As people have given great support to us we are opening a new branch here. It is the largest cinema in the town where people can enjoy different kinds of shows such as Bollywood, Gujarati and Hollywood movies. It has five big screens with the best sound system. It is located in the main city area.

I would like to invite you to open our theatre. Our opening ceremony is on 14th June 2026 at 11 o’clock. As you are very popular Gujarati actress, people would be delighted to meet you. You are truly one of the best actresses in Gujrat and you have already won audience’s heart by your outstanding performances in every Film.

Thank you for your attention to this letter. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Janvi Mevada.

Word Count: 161

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

theatre: 3

people: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, providing relevant information about the new theatre, extending an invitation, and explaining why the actor would be a good fit. There are no significant omissions. To further enhance the letter, consider adding more specific details about the theatre's unique features or the expected audience at the opening. Also, you could elaborate further on the benefits for the actor in opening the theatre, such as publicity or networking opportunities.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and the purpose is clear from the beginning. The information about the theatre and the invitation are presented logically. However, the transition between describing the theatre and inviting the actor could be smoother. Consider adding a sentence that directly links the theatre's features to why her presence would be beneficial. For example, you could mention how her popularity aligns with the theatre's aim to showcase diverse films.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and conveys the message effectively. Words like 'inauguration,' 'delighted,' and 'outstanding performances' are well-chosen. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider using more varied synonyms and descriptive language. For instance, instead of 'very popular,' you could use 'renowned' or 'highly acclaimed.' Also, instead of 'best sound system,' you could describe it as 'state-of-the-art sound system.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar with only minor errors. The sentence structures are varied and generally accurate. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage. For example, 'best actresses in Gujrat' should be 'best actresses in Gujarat'. Overall, the grammar is strong and contributes to the clarity of the letter.

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