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Band 4+: your English speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. write an email to you friend. in your email recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you learn this sport together.

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kindly Mr. John,

I hope you are a good health and wealth. I’m writing to recommend a new sport to learn to you.

In our current live, specially we are doing to play cricket because we have quiche playground and our people also actively playing cricket day to life. But that is not only one choice you can learn more new games such as football, volleyball, netball, and badminton.

moreover, I knew you very well and I heard about in your daily life also similar that is most of the watching the TV shows were cricket matches that by you got knowledge of playing cricket. so you can start to play cricket. besides that badminton is the other option. this you will easily learn to play in two, three days. there are two doing the game in small space.

As I knew you are a quick learner you have to do the both games. I think minimum one week enough for you. as I wish you will do well and keep in touch with me. take care buddy.

best of luck,

diroyan

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A1 - Beginner
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cricket: 5

learn: 3

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by recommending a new sport (cricket and badminton) and suggesting learning it together. However, the explanation on how to learn the sport is lacking detail and clarity. It would be beneficial to provide more specific guidance on how to start learning the recommended sport and how you can learn it together.

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The message is somewhat coherent, but there are issues with cohesion and paragraphing. The ideas are not consistently organized, and the transitions between sentences and ideas are not always smooth. Consider structuring the email with clearer paragraph breaks and using cohesive devices to improve the overall coherence.

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There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but it is not always accurate or appropriate. Additionally, there are instances of awkward phrasing and grammatical errors that affect the overall lexical resource. Aim for more precise and natural use of vocabulary and expressions to enhance the lexical quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates an attempt to use a variety of structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout. Punctuation and sentence structure need improvement for better accuracy. It's important to review and revise the grammar to ensure more accurate and appropriate usage.

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