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Band 4+: your English speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. write an email to you friend. in your email recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you learn this sport together.

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Dear Shiba,

I writing this to reply your last letter about what new sport for you to learn.

With you, Shiba, I recommend that you should learn to play badminton. And about why, firstly you are not very tall but in my eyes, I can see that you are really swift that you are overqualified to play badminton. Secondly, we are living in Vietnam where badminton is the top notch, top tier sport that mostly people go for. Moreover, to be able to play badminton, the requirement that you can’t be fat, and of cource it’s crystal clear that you are very thin so that you are perfectly fitted to play badminton.

And about how could you learn this sport, there is a teacher that is teaching badminton that’s just 100 miles far from my house so that I can guide you there if you want to learn badminton. After you learn some basic knowledge, you can find some of the students to play table tennis with them, so that you can improve your skills.

I can play badminton, so I can go to the badminton course with you, and listen to the coaches’ class together, so that during our free time, we can play badminton together, and that must be very fun!

I really want to play badminton with you!

Best regards,

Hoang

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

badminton: 10

learn: 4

about: 3

sport: 3

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Task Response

5

The letter partially addresses the task by recommending a new sport (badminton) for the friend to learn, explaining why it is suitable, and suggesting learning it together. However, the response could be more detailed and structured to fully meet the task requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

4

The message is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and organization. The ideas could be better connected to improve the overall flow of the letter.

Lexical Resource

5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are repetitive or not the most suitable choices. Work on expanding your vocabulary and using more precise language to enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

While there is an effort to use a variety of sentence structures, there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout the letter. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, word choice, and sentence construction to improve accuracy.

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