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Band 5+: Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email: Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

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Dear Geeta,

Hope you are doing well. I am really happy to listen about your admission at my university

when i was enrolled their i always live in a hostel lawyers in. Because it is not too far from the university and also the atmosphere there is very friendly and most importantly the security their is very secure guards available on the gate whole day. Additionaly, they dont allow any strainger and unknown persons as a girl we always need secure enviroment to live peacfully.

I would suggest you to look on social media , specifically on facebook their is a vacancy group on Fb from their you can get your desire accomodation. However, if you want to live in that same hostel where i used to i can provide you the direct contact.

Additionaly, whenever looking for accomodation always prefer hostels rather then bachelors flat because thy re not safe. Also always look for nearest place from your university as it will save huge amount of time.

Best Wishes

Preeti Kumari

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 4

always: 4

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Task Response

The letter adequately covers the task requirements, describing accommodation, recommending search methods, and offering warnings. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but the overall message is clear. To improve, focus on using more natural and varied language and ensuring grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider using more explicit transitions between paragraphs to guide the reader. For example, you could start a new paragraph when transitioning from describing your own accommodation to offering advice on finding accommodation. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'secure,' try synonyms like 'safe,' 'protected,' or 'guarded.' Expanding your vocabulary range will make your writing more engaging and effective.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, 'when i was enrolled their i always live in a hostel lawyers in' should be revised for better grammar and clarity. Proofreading carefully will help catch these errors.

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