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Band 4+: Your high school friend who has moved to another country will be visiting your country for a month. You have arranged a party for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, give the date and location of the party say who are coming to the party and mention things that he/she has missed during his/her stay in another country Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Hi, Jahnai

I am writing this letter regarding that you are going to be part of the USA. Before you left this country I would like to invite you in my hometown for a amazing party for you, I would appreciate that you will accept my request.

In addition, I have recently organised the party of best facilities with delicious food. Moreover, I am excited to say that on of a our school friend riya will also be part of your party soon. Who will bring so much fun on their occasion. The event is which I organised on 5th september 2024, the 3rd floor of platinum palace, Which is quite near from my house.

I would ganualiy request you to came on this day cause without you the party will be a amazing party as well, I also gave the invitation the party to hemansu who has currently living in australia, he will definitely missed this function.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon

Your faithfully

Yash,

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

party: 6

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by inviting the friend to a party in the hometown, mentioning the date, location, and one friend attending. However, it lacks details about what the friend has missed during their stay in another country.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent but lacks smooth transitions between ideas. There are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of information. Consider organizing the content more logically for better cohesion.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately. Work on improving the precision and appropriateness of vocabulary choices. Additionally, watch out for spelling errors ('ganualiy' should be 'cordially').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While a variety of sentence structures are attempted, there are several grammatical errors throughout the letter. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, and sentence construction for better accuracy.

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