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Band 4+: Your neighbor's dog frequently barks at night, disturbing your sleep and that of other residents. Write a letter to your neighbor explaining the problem. You should include details about: - how the barking affects you and others - when the barking usually occurs - suggest possible solutions to the issue.

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Dear Mrs. Sara,

I hope you will be doing well. Iam writing this letter to inform you my concern about your pets.

Its such a long time that I want to write this letter for you because your dog is distrub us during the night beacuse of extremy barks and It really has a worse effects on our sleeps it makes us headache . Morover my sister has exam and she study her lesson during night she cant focuse on her schooling.

One way to control this situation is to make a install a electronic PVC door which does not allow to get out noises outside. Or you should Talk to some Veterinarian to check it what is the main problem.

I respectfully, ask you to assist us to resolve this huge concern to have a peacful sleep and find the main issue with your pet.

Iam looking for your respnd. And l hpoe this problem solve quickly.

yours faithfully,

Nasto Ahmadi

Word Count: 162

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements by explaining the problem, suggesting solutions, and requesting cooperation. There are some language errors and awkward phrasing that could be improved. For example, 'distrub us during the night beacuse of extremy barks' could be rephrased for clarity. Also, ensure consistent spelling ('disturb' instead of 'distrub'). To improve, focus on using more precise language and proofreading for grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more explicit transition words and phrases to connect your thoughts and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point. For example, you could start a new paragraph when transitioning from explaining the problem to suggesting solutions.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inaccurate ('distrub,' 'extremy,' 'worse effects'). To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary that is more precise and appropriate for the context. For instance, instead of 'worse effects,' you could say 'significantly disrupts' or 'negatively impacts.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and sentence structure problems. For example, 'Iam writing this letter to inform you my concern about your pets' should be 'I am writing this letter to express my concern about your pet.' Focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure to improve clarity. Proofread carefully to catch and correct errors.

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