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Band 6+: It is often said that nowadays children are undisciplined because their parents are busy with their career. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is an undeniable fact that many young children are forced to build their careers. Therefore, adults should devote less time to raising their offspring. The main reason why children are undisciplined is because parents are too focused and attached to their work. This essay provides evidence for this thesis and suggests appropriate measures for establishing sustainable relationships with youth in order to develop discipline.

First, neglect nowadays encourages adults to achieve more in their careers, which has become the main reason why children do not follow the rules. A clear example of this is street children, whose fathers do not spend much time with their children, and children’s behavior is mainly dependent on information on the Internet. They are forced to call their parents when they notice their teachers at their school misbehaving. Not only is it a modern trend for parents to give too much attention to their profession and promote it instead of spending time on raising their children. Therefore, neglecting one’s work is the main cause of poor behavior in children.

However, if parents spend more time with their children, it allows them to build valuable relationships with their children and instill a sense of discipline. A striking example of this is that current Japanese education statistics show that the average amount of time adults spend with their children is 2.4 hours, and this is reflected in every teacher’s assessment of children’s behavior. something is being hidden, parents are paying more attention to their children and 70% more children obey the street rules. Therefore, it creates an opportunity to properly allocate time and education with a son or daughter.

To sum up, the existence of disorder among young people in society cannot be ruled out. The main reason for this is that parents spend time with their children so that their children’s future will not be indifferent. We hope that parents will find work-life balance in the future

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