Could you check my IELTS essay of the following topic "Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extend to you agree or disagree ?

Media has a pervasive presence in our lives, and reliable sources of information are crucial for society. However, media barons are believed to have significant influence over public opinion, and this is unlikely to change. This essay fully agrees with this point of view, as owners of the media have all the resources to spread […]