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Band 4+: Do children behave better when they are physical punished or rewarded. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Without any doubt society divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different perspectives. Therefore, this has become a debatable issue whether children behave better when they physically punished or rewarded. In the upcoming paragraph I will both the views and give my opinion.

To begin with, some individuals think that children behave good when they physically punished. If children are physically punished they are scared from their parents and and they are not friendly with their tutors. Additionally, child’s not talk with their parents openly and all time scared from them. For example, one survey shows the children who physically punished by their parents, so they have less connection with their tutors in upcoming time.

On the other hand, mostly, children behave better when they are rewarded by their guardian. If pupils are gifted by their guardian they are more closely with their parents. Moreover, gifted by tutors not only encouraged pupils but also have more respect for their parents. Gifted children can experience pride and self-esteem. For example, in foreign country, students who gifted by their guardian are encouraged to do more good works like help anyone who is in trouble.

In conclusion, physically punishment make children rudely for their parents. However, rewarded or gifted children encouraged by their parents to do more good works for other like help or create best bound with their parents.

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