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Band 4+: The map shows the chances I'm Shipsmouth between 1995 and 2010

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The image depicts two comparative illustrations of a place labeled "Shipsmouth," one from 1995 and the other from 2010. The 1995 illustration shows a factory with smoke, a city center with a car, a station, and a church among trees, bordered by water on the left. The 2010 illustration has apartment blocks, a pedestrian-only city center, a station, a shopping center, a football stadium, skyscrapers, a pub, a house, and an airport, also bordered by water on the left.

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Maps illustrate a comparison of common and probably not real city which located in England, called as Shipsmouth, from two times.

The map of 1995, shows situation of region, which economics related into logistics center as railway station, and object of industry such as factory, also seems like all necessary infrastructure for monotonous average brittish city back in 1995 year, in addition. There is an old european-brittish architechture style, as a result buildings make Shipsmouth a bit conservarive, obviously the church and town-houses made that.

Hovewer, this town’s development as logistic regional center as can we see, probably turned from mono-city into enormous megapolis, in which spheres of activities more diverse than 15 years ago. The town hall managed the savings effectively, without any corruption. The motorway turned into pedestrian zone, that correspend to modern european urban trends. Less threes and more commercial or residential areas.

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Task Response

The report identifies some key changes between the two maps but lacks specific details and accurate descriptions. The analysis is somewhat general and speculative, with phrases like "probably not real city" and assumptions about the town's economics and management. To improve, focus on providing concrete descriptions of the changes observed in the maps, using precise language and avoiding unnecessary speculation or personal opinions. Also, ensure a more balanced coverage of all the main features and changes depicted in the maps. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a cohesive manner, making it difficult to follow the comparison between the two maps. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate distinct ideas. Consider organizing the report into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the changes observed. Use cohesive devices (e.g., transition words, pronouns) to link ideas and sentences together.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies and inappropriate word choices (e.g., "common and probably not real city", "monotonous average brittish city"). The vocabulary used is not always precise or effectively conveys the intended meaning. Expand your vocabulary related to urban development, infrastructure, and architectural styles. Focus on using more precise and descriptive language to accurately represent the information in the maps.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede clarity and comprehension. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your report.

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