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Band 7+: * Why do some people find it difficult or uncomfortable to socialise?

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Probably it depends on personality; in fact, many people are shy and more introverted than others. Moreover, people sometimes might feel anxious in social situations, especially when they don't know the people or the context. Additionally, past negative experiences can make it harder to open up and build new connections.

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Probably it depends on how personality, in fact many people are shy and more introverse than other. Moreover, people sometimes might feel anxious in social situation, especially when they don’t know the people and the context. Addictionary past negative experience can make it harder to open up and building new connection.

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