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Band 6+: * Why do some people find it difficult or uncomfortable to socialise?

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Well, I think sometimes people may suffer from discomfort or some kind of anxiety that makes it difficult for them to speak in public. When socializing, they might worry that people will judge their appearance or how they are dressed. It can be a little bit like being an introvert, as I was when I was younger. I always thought about my appearance and how people perceived my clothing, and I worried that they might judge me for it. However, it shouldn't be this way, and people shouldn't engage in such behavior. They can be part of our group when they don't focus on these kinds of judgments. That's all.

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Well, I think sometimes people, sometimes people may suffer from the, suffer from the uncomfortable or some kind of, they cannot speak in the public because they, to socialize, I think they might think people may judge it, their appearance or how they are dressing. So, and it can be, it can be a little bit introvert as me. Whenever I was younger, I was an introvert person and I always thought about my appearance and my dress, how people think that and they may be, they might be, judge my appearance or how dress it. So, I know, but it shouldn’t be and people shouldn’t do such kind of things and they can part in our group, part in our group when they do not this kind of things. That’s all.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

they: 5

people: 4

that: 3

when: 3

might: 2

judge: 2

appearance: 2

shouldn't: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some insights into why some people find socializing difficult. However, it could benefit from a broader perspective and less focus on personal experience. Consider exploring other reasons, such as social anxiety, communication barriers, or lack of social skills, to provide a more comprehensive response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the fluency could be improved. There's some repetition and hesitation ('sometimes people, sometimes people'). The structure is a bit rambling. Try to plan your response briefly before speaking to improve coherence and reduce repetition.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'uncomfortable' and 'judge' are used repeatedly. Try to incorporate more precise and varied vocabulary to describe social anxiety and the fear of judgment. For example, instead of 'judge,' you could use 'criticize,' 'evaluate,' or 'assess,' depending on the nuance you want to convey.

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There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect tense usage and sentence structure. For example, 'they cannot speak in the public because they, to socialize' is grammatically incorrect. Work on sentence construction and ensure consistent tense usage. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences, to improve accuracy and sophistication.

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