Band 6+: 1. What advantages can tourism bring to a city?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a valid point about increased finances through visitor spending. However, to achieve a higher score, consider expanding on other advantages of tourism, such as job creation, infrastructure improvements, and cultural exchange. More detailed explanation of each point would also strengthen the response.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition and self-correction could be avoided for improved fluency. Try to connect your ideas more smoothly using transition words like 'Furthermore,' 'Moreover,' or 'In addition to this'.

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and sophisticated. Instead of 'increasing the finance of the city,' consider 'boosting the city's economy' or 'generating significant revenue for the city.' The phrase 'This country builds opportunities for business' is inaccurate and should be replaced with something like 'This creates opportunities for local businesses'

Grammar is mostly accurate, with a minor error ('finance' should be 'finances'). Sentence structures are simple but effective. Try incorporating more complex grammatical structures to demonstrate a wider range, such as passive voice or relative clauses.