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Band 6+: 1. What advantages can tourism bring to a city?

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Okay, so in my opinion, tourism can bring a lot of advantages to the city. I know that it can contribute to the economy. Tourism creates opportunities for local people and local businesses. Tourists can buy things from local vendors, which boosts their incomes, and salaries also contribute to the economy of the city. Secondly, tourism can make a place more popular and famous through recommendations to others. As a result, the city will become more developed.

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Okay, so in my opinion tourism can bring to the city a lot of advantage, I know that they can bring to the city of contribution to the economy. Now tourism create opportunities for local people and local business. Tourists can buy things from local vendor which embrace their incomes and salary also contributes to the economy of the city. Secondly tourism can make a place more and more popular and famous with recommendations to others. As a result the city will become more developed.

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tourism: 3

city: 3

local: 3

contribute: 2

economy: 2

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The answer is well-organized and coherent, covering the main aspects of the question. To improve, consider providing more specific examples of economic contributions and elaborating on the ways tourism leads to city development. Broadening the scope to include social and cultural impacts would further enhance the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-structured, with a clear introduction and two main points. The speech is mostly fluent, although there are a few minor hesitations and repetitions. Improving the flow by using more sophisticated linking words and phrases would enhance the fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and appropriate for the topic. Words like "contribute," "opportunities," and "vendors" demonstrate a good range. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could be used to elevate the response. For example, instead of 'boost their incomes,' you could say 'increase their revenue streams'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors, such as the use of "a lot of advantage." The sentence structure is relatively simple. Using more complex grammatical structures, such as passive voice or embedded clauses, would improve the grammatical range and accuracy. For example, instead of 'Tourism creates opportunities,' you could say 'Opportunities are created by tourism'.

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