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Band 7+: 1. What are the required qualities of a role model?

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In my opinion, the essential qualities of a role model include determination, hard work, and a positive attitude. This is because role models often face challenges in life. Seeing someone who never gives up can be incredibly motivating.

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In my opinion, the essential qualities of a role model include determination and hard work or positive attitude. These because role models often face challenges in life. Seeing someone who never gives up can be incredibly motivating.

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The answer is relevant to the question and provides some qualities of a role model. However, it could be improved by elaborating on each quality and providing more specific examples. Consider exploring a wider range of qualities beyond determination, hard work, and a positive attitude. A more comprehensive response would strengthen the answer. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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