Band 7+: 2. Have you changed your mind on your dream job?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is clear and directly answers the question. The reasons for maintaining the same dream job are well-articulated. The answer could be improved by providing a bit more detail or a specific example related to acting or being on stage.

The response is generally fluent, but there are some pauses and repetitions ('I don't change my mind'). The ideas are connected, but could be linked more smoothly. Try to use a wider range of linking words and phrases to improve coherence. For example, instead of repeating 'For this reason, I don't change my mind,' you could say 'Therefore, my passion remains unchanged.'

The vocabulary is adequate and relevant to the topic. The candidate uses words like 'acting,' 'expressing emotions,' 'confident,' and 'happy.' To improve, try to incorporate more sophisticated vocabulary related to performing arts and career aspirations. For example, use 'theatrical performance' instead of 'show my performance.'

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. For example, 'own stage' should be 'own the stage.' The range of structures is somewhat limited. To improve, try to use more complex sentence structures and a wider variety of grammatical forms. For example, use conditional sentences or relative clauses to add depth to your response.