Part 3

Band 6+: 2. How do you think e-sports will affect the future of entertainment?

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I think eSports will affect the future of sports in a negative way. Nowadays, the younger generation is reluctant to go to the field to engage in physical sports, which are more valuable and necessary for their mental and physical well-being. Due to the rapid popularity and engrossment in eSports, people keep themselves busy with eSports at home, which is an alarming issue. If this continues, it will lead to a community developing without any physical sports, and the physical fitness of the younger generation will be hampered, causing them to become lazy.

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I think eSports will affect the future sports in a negative way. As nowadays, young generation are reluctant to go to the field to engage themselves in physical sports, which are more valuable and necessary for their mental and physical well-being. But due to the rapid popularity and engrossment in eSports, people nowadays keep themselves busy with eSports at home, which is an alarming issue. And if this persists to continue, this will help a community to develop a community without any physical sports and physical fitness of young generation will be hampered and they become lazy.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

physical: 4

esports: 3

will: 3

sports: 3

younger: 2

generation: 2

which: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is quite one-sided and focuses heavily on the negative impacts of esports. Consider exploring potential positive impacts on the entertainment industry, such as new forms of media consumption, innovative technologies, and global community building. Broadening the scope of your response will make it more comprehensive and balanced.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition and slightly hesitant phrasing ('And if this persists to continue') could be improved by using more concise language. The ideas are logically connected, but smoother transitions would enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'engrossment' and 'hampered' show a good range. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could be used to express the ideas more effectively. For example, instead of 'alarming issue,' a more nuanced term could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence 'And if this persists to continue...' is grammatically incorrect and awkwardly phrased. While the message is clear, more complex grammatical structures could be used to demonstrate a wider range. The use of articles could also be improved in a few places.

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