Band 6+: Are computer skills important for work today?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer stays on topic and provides a relevant example to support the point. However, it could be more fully developed by discussing a broader range of reasons or contexts, such as how computer skills are essential across different industries or for specific tasks like data analysis, communication, or automation. Additionally, the response could be more general and less reliant on a single example to achieve a more native-like and comprehensive discussion.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow, with a clear structure: a general statement followed by a reason and an example. However, it is quite short and lacks development or linking words to enhance flow. To improve, expand on the example or add a concluding sentence, and use cohesive devices like 'for instance' or 'as a result'.

Vocabulary is adequate and relevant, with terms like 'demanding skills' and 'headhunter'. However, there is limited range and precision; 'demanding skills' should be 'demanded skills' (as in the refined answer). To improve, use more varied and precise vocabulary, such as 'essential', 'proficiency', or 'indispensable'.

Grammar is mostly accurate with simple structures, but there are minor errors: 'in LinkedIn or headhunter' should be 'on LinkedIn or headhunter' (preposition), and 'demanding skills' should be 'demanded skills' (adjective form). The sentence structure is basic. To improve, use a mix of complex sentences, e.g., 'Given that technology permeates every industry, computer skills have become indispensable, as evidenced by their prominence on platforms like LinkedIn.'