Band 6+: Do people spend too much time using technology?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer stays on topic and directly addresses the question, providing a clear stance that people do spend a lot of time using technology. It includes a relevant example to support the point. However, the response is somewhat limited in depth and could be more fully developed. To improve, consider elaborating on the reasons why this might be excessive, discussing potential consequences, or offering a balanced view (e.g., acknowledging that technology use can be productive or necessary). Additionally, ensure the answer remains general rather than personal, which it currently does. Expanding the response with more detailed reasoning and a broader perspective would enhance its completeness and naturalness.

The answer is coherent and logically organized, with a clear introduction, reason, and example. However, there is some repetition ('this is the reason why') and the response is relatively short, lacking development. To improve, expand on the idea by discussing both sides of the issue or providing more detailed examples.

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic, with some good collocations like 'important part of our lives' and 'spend free time.' However, there is a minor error: 'more cheaper' should be 'cheaper' (double comparative). To achieve a higher score, use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'ubiquitous,' 'excessive use,' or 'digital devices.'

The grammar is mostly accurate, with correct use of present simple and an example. However, there is a notable error: 'more cheaper' (double comparative) and 'much over free time' should be 'much of their free time.' The sentence structures are simple and could be more varied. To improve, incorporate complex sentences and a wider range of grammatical structures.