Band 6+: Do people spend too much time using technology?

Your pronunciation is very good. Aim to refine subtleties and intonation to further improve.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides a clear opinion with a reason. It stays on topic and is appropriately general, avoiding personal anecdotes. To achieve a higher score, consider expanding on the reasons with more depth and providing a balanced view, such as mentioning other factors like work or social media, and perhaps suggesting potential consequences or solutions.

The answer is coherent and addresses the question directly. However, there are some hesitations and a lack of smooth transitions. The phrase 'but the most is' is awkward and could be rephrased for better flow. To improve, use clearer cohesive devices and avoid abrupt shifts in ideas.

The vocabulary is adequate but not highly precise. Phrases like 'find happiness in spending money and their time' are slightly redundant and could be more concise. Using more specific terms such as 'escape into virtual reality' or 'seek solace in online gaming' would enhance lexical precision.

There are minor grammatical errors, such as 'the most is' (should be 'the most significant is') and 'in being someone' (should be 'and being someone'). The sentence structure is mostly simple, with limited use of complex structures. To improve, incorporate a wider range of grammatical forms and ensure accuracy in complex sentences.