Band 6+: Are most people in your country more interested in sports now then they were in the past?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear reason for the increased interest in sports, specifically mentioning eSports. The comparison between past and present activities is relevant. To improve, consider broadening the scope beyond just eSports and perhaps offering more diverse reasons for the increased interest.

The response is generally understandable, but there are some hesitations and repetitions ('in their free time they prefer to and in their free time they prefer to'). Using cohesive devices like 'therefore' or 'consequently' could improve the flow. Try to avoid unnecessary repetition and aim for smoother transitions between ideas.

The vocabulary is adequate but somewhat limited. The phrase 'front land' is not quite accurate; 'farmland' is better. Expanding your vocabulary related to leisure activities and historical comparisons would be beneficial. For example, instead of just saying 'more work,' you could specify 'more manual labor' or 'more agricultural tasks.'

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'eSports now that they were in the past' (should be 'than they were in the past') and awkward phrasing. While the overall meaning is clear, improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure would enhance the response. Focus on using correct comparative structures and varied sentence types.