Band 5+: Are there any difference between the people who were famous a few years ago and the people who are famous today

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it lacks specific examples and detailed comparisons between the two groups of famous people. Consider structuring your response to directly address the differences, perhaps focusing on how fame is achieved and maintained, the types of people who achieve fame, and the impact they have on society. More specific examples would strengthen your response.

The answer is understandable but lacks a clear structure and organization. The comparison between past and present fame is not explicitly stated. Improving fluency would involve clearer transitions between ideas and a more concise delivery. Consider using phrases like "In contrast to the past..." or "Unlike previous generations of celebrities..." to improve coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "interfere" could be replaced with more precise terms, such as "influence" or "interact with." Expanding the vocabulary with more nuanced terms related to fame and its impact would enhance the response.

There are grammatical inaccuracies and inconsistencies. For example, the sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. The use of articles is inconsistent. Focusing on accurate sentence construction and improving the use of articles and tenses would significantly improve the grammatical accuracy.