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Band 7+: Describe a dream palce / home you would like to live in the future What kind of place it is Who you want to live with Why you want to live there ?

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I always dream of living in Edinburgh, which is a city in Scotland. That place is very charming, astonishing, and marvelous to me. Everything there is so aesthetic and reflects the Celtic era. I want to spend the rest of my life there with my future husband so we can build our small house. It would consist of a big garden where I can plant flowers, including my favorite, which is white tulips. I want a small bedroom, a cozy kitchen, and a small living room. I really enjoy a modest life.

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I always dream of living in Edinburgh, which is a town in Scotland. That place really is very charming, astonishing and marvelous for me. Everything there is so aesthetic and it brings the Celtic era. There I want to spend the rest of my life with my future husband so we can build our small house. There which consists of a big garden that I can plant flowers, including my favorite one, which is white tulips. I want a small bedroom, bedrooms, a cozy kitchen and a small living room. I really enjoy a modesty life.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

small: 3

living: 2

which: 2

there: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the prompt by describing a dream home in Edinburgh. More details about why you want to live there could further strengthen the answer. Expanding on the activities you would do in your dream home and with whom would enhance the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent and follows a logical structure, addressing the prompts effectively. However, there are a few instances where the flow could be smoother. For example, the transition between describing Edinburgh and detailing the house could be more seamless. To improve, practice using transitional phrases to connect ideas more clearly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and includes some descriptive words like 'charming,' 'astonishing,' and 'marvelous.' However, the range could be broader and more precise. For instance, instead of just saying 'aesthetic,' you could elaborate on what makes it aesthetic (e.g., 'its historical architecture and well-preserved buildings'). To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to architecture, lifestyle, and personal preferences.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors that affect the overall impression. For example, 'There which consists of a big garden' is slightly awkward and could be rephrased as 'It would consist of a big garden.' Also, 'a modesty life' should be 'a modest life.' To improve, focus on refining sentence structures and ensuring correct word usage. Review common grammatical errors and practice constructing more complex sentences accurately.

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