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Band 6+: Describe a job you would like to do in the future What the job is How would you learn about the job What job involves Why you would like to do

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Okay, thank you very much for asking this question. So today I would like to describe a job that I would like to do in the future. I would like to be a doctor because I really like working with medicines and I really like helping other people. Actually, I enjoy the smells of the medicine because they smell good. What kind of skills does a doctor need to do this job? I think it's communication skills because we will hear the patients. We will accept the words from the patients, and we need to be confident with that. We also need to know about the medicines and what we should give to the patient if they are sick or have other issues. I think that's all from me today. Thank you very much.

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Okay, thank you very much for asking this question. So today I would like to describe a job that I would like to do in the future. I would like to be a doctor in my future because I really like to play with the medicines and I really like to helping other persons. Actually, I relived with the smells of the medicine because that smells good. What kind of skills does a doctor need to do this job? I think it’s a communicating skills because we will hurt the patients. We will accept the words from the patients and we need to be confident with that and we need to know about the medicines. what should we give to the patient if they are sex or others? I think that’s all from me today. Thank you very much.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

like: 5

would: 3

because: 3

need: 3

thank: 2

today: 2

doctor: 2

really: 2

medicines: 2

other: 2

skills: 2

think: 2

patients: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the prompt but could benefit from more detailed elaboration. Consider expanding on why you want to be a doctor, providing specific examples of how you envision yourself helping people, and discussing the challenges and rewards of the profession. Adding more personal insights and specific details would enhance the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are some abrupt shifts in thought and a lack of smooth transitions between ideas. The structure is basic, and while the ideas are related to the topic, they could be organized more logically. To improve, focus on using cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'in addition,' 'however') to link sentences and ideas more effectively. Practice structuring your response with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is relatively simple and lacks precision. There are some instances of inaccurate word choice (e.g., 'relived with the smells'). To enhance your lexical resource, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to the topic of medicine and healthcare. Focus on learning synonyms and collocations to express your ideas more accurately and effectively. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The response contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('I relived'), subject-verb agreement issues ('that smells good'), and awkward phrasing ('we will hurt the patients'). To improve, focus on practicing basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Review and correct your common errors to enhance accuracy.

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