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Band 6+: Describe a long walk you ever had

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A long walk that I had was at Thammasat University. This happened on an open holiday. I went with my friends Beam, Old Bloom, and Boonin. I have had plenty of long walks in my life. I had to walk from the entrance to each faculty, and my phone was dead. I had walked more than one thousand steps. When it ended, I felt like my legs were working. And for the next whole week, I felt I didn't want to walk anymore because I had a hard peak that day.

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A long vlog that I had was in the Tamasat University. This happened was on an open holiday. I went with my friend in Beam Old Bloom and Boonin. I have had plenty of long work forever in my life. I had to walk from the entrance to each faculty and my phone was an all. I had work more than one thousand times. When it wasn’t, I felt like my late work was working. And in the next whole week, I felt I didn’t want to work anymore because I had a hard peak on the day.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

4.5

The response addresses the prompt and provides some details about the walk. Consider expanding on the details of the walk, what you saw, how you felt, and the overall experience. Providing more specific details and personal reflections would enhance the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent, but there are some noticeable pauses and hesitations. The connections between ideas could be smoother. Try using more discourse markers like 'furthermore,' 'in addition,' or 'as a result' to improve the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the topic, but it lacks precision and variety. Instead of 'long walk,' consider using more descriptive terms like 'hike,' 'stroll,' or 'trek.' Also, try to use synonyms for 'walk' to avoid repetition. For instance, you could say 'wandered' or 'explored.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors, such as incorrect tense usage ('my phone was an all') and prepositional errors ('in the next whole week'). While these errors don't impede understanding, they do detract from the overall impression. Review the correct use of tenses and prepositions.

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