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Band 5+: Describe a person who contributes to the society You should say: - Who this person is - How you knew him/her - What type of work he/she does - And explain why you think he/she contributes to the society

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Well, there are many contributors to society, like parents, teachers, and doctors. I know teachers contribute more to society because they teach people. I know the teachers who help people. Every time they need help, they assist them. I know a doctor whose name is San. He helps me. When I had a rash on my skin, I know he contributes to me because he assists in improving my skin. I am grateful for that. In society, I know that farmers also contribute to people because they provide food.

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Well, there are many contributors to society, like parents, teachers and doctors. I know teachers are more contribute to society because they teach people. I know the teachers who help people. Every time they need help, they assist them. I know a doctor whose name is San. He helps me. When I had a hill on my skin, I know he contributes to me because he assist to improve my skin. I am grateful for that. I play the game. On society, I know that farmers are too contribute for people because they bring more food.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

know: 5

they: 4

society: 3

teachers: 3

because: 3

people: 3

contribute: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The response is somewhat relevant to the topic but lacks depth and detail. Consider expanding on the chosen person, providing more specific examples of their contributions and elaborating on how their work benefits society. More specific details and personal experiences would strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

5.5

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. There's some repetition and a lack of smooth transitions between ideas. Focus on creating a clearer narrative flow by using linking words and phrases (e.g., 'Furthermore', 'In addition', 'Moreover'). Practice speaking more naturally and avoid hesitations and fillers.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and range. While the speaker uses words like 'contribute' and 'assist', more sophisticated vocabulary would enhance the response. Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive language to paint a clearer picture of the person and their work. For example, instead of 'helps people,' describe the specific ways the teacher helps. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The grammar is mostly correct, but there are some minor errors and inconsistencies. The sentence structure is sometimes simple and repetitive. Work on using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and passive voice, to demonstrate greater grammatical control. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage.

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