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Band 7+: Describe a person who encouraged and helped you to achieve a goal

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69% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.
Polished transcript:
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I am willing to tell you about Shazad. He is a very clever and cheerful person. I have learned a lot from him. He always tries to help me when I have a problem. He has a natural charisma that draws people to him. He speaks with such eloquence that everybody listens attentively. He is very well-spoken when talking to people. Additionally, he is very visionary and is an influential person.
Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I am willing to tell you about Shazad. He is a very clever and cheerful person. I have learned a lot of things from him. He always tries to help me when I have a problem. He has natural charisma that draws people to him. He speaks with such eloquence that everybody listens attentively. He is very well spoken when talking to people. Additionally, he is very visionary and is an influential person.

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Overall Band Score

7
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
very: 3
person: 2
people: 2
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Pronunciation

6
Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

6
The answer is quite positive and well-structured. However, it lacks specific details about a goal and how Shazad helped achieve it. Adding a concrete example of a goal and Shazad's specific actions in supporting you would significantly improve the response.

Fluency & Coherence

7
The answer is coherent and well-structured. The description flows logically. Minor improvements could be made by adding specific examples of how Shazad helped you achieve a goal, making the narrative more engaging and illustrating the impact of his encouragement.

Lexical Resource

8
The vocabulary is sophisticated and precise. Words like "charisma," "eloquence," and "visionary" demonstrate a strong command of language. Consider adding more specific vocabulary related to the goal and the methods of encouragement.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7
Grammar is mostly accurate. Minor errors such as "a lot of things" instead of "a lot" are easily overlooked. Using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences with subordinate clauses, would enhance the answer.

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Describe a person who encouraged and helped you to achieve a goal

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