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Band 5+: Describe a person who encouraged and helped you to achieve a goal.

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I am going to describe a person who encouraged me to achieve my goals. This person is my teacher, my English teacher. His name is Anwar, and he is very polite, kind, and intelligent. He is one of my favorite people. His feelings are very great. My teacher always helped me develop many skills, and he taught me for two years. He has taught me English for two years. I have finished learning the English language. I got an IELTS score, and I have achieved my goals. In this way, my teacher helped me a lot, and I appreciate it. My teacher always tried to answer my phone calls. My teacher has many qualities. He is very intelligent, and I relate to him. My teacher encouraged me because he always said I was the best student among others. I think I was encouraged by my teacher.

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I am going to describe person who encouraged me to achieve my goals. This person is my teacher, which is English teacher. His name is Anwar and he is very polite and kind-ness, intelligent people. This is my favorite people. His feeling is very great. My teachers always helped me a lot of skills and he taught me two years. This sign is two years. He has preached me sign is two years in English language. I have finished learning English language. I get an IELTS and I have achieved my goals. In this way, my teachers helped me a lot. I appreciate it. My teachers always helped me a lot. They always tried to answer my phone calls. My teachers have four things. They are very intelligent. I have related to them. My teachers encouraged me in my opinion because they always said I am the best student among other students. I think that encouraged by my teachers.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

teacher: 8

encouraged: 3

english: 3

very: 3

always: 3

person: 2

goals: 2

intelligent: 2

helped: 2

taught: 2

years: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is quite repetitive and lacks specific details. Try to focus on one or two key instances where your teacher helped you, providing more detail and showing, rather than telling, the impact they had. For example, instead of saying 'He helped me develop many skills,' describe a specific skill and how he helped you develop it. Adding more specific examples of his encouragement will strengthen your response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but there are moments of hesitation and repetition. The structure is a bit rambling. Work on creating a clearer narrative structure with a strong introduction, body, and conclusion. Practice speaking more smoothly and confidently, reducing repetition like "My teachers always helped me a lot." Consider using transition words to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision in places. Phrases like "His feeling is very great" are not quite right. Work on expanding your vocabulary and using more precise and sophisticated language. For example, instead of 'kind-ness,' use 'kind' or 'kindhearted.' Instead of 'His feelings are very great,' try 'He is very supportive' or 'He is very encouraging.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is inconsistent. There are errors such as subject-verb agreement ("His feeling is..."), incorrect article usage, and some awkward phrasing. Focus on improving accuracy in basic grammar structures. Pay attention to singular/plural agreement, article usage (a, an, the), and tense consistency. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice and more complex sentence structures.

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