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Band 5+: Describe a person who has chosen a career in medical field

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Well, there are a lot of people in our surroundings, some we like and some we dislike. As social beings, we have to interact with many people every day, and they play a range of positive and negative roles in our lives. Being a people person, I know many individuals who have chosen different careers to improve their lives. Today, I'm going to talk about someone who chose a career in the medical field. The person I'm referring to is none other than Mr. Ryan Jodin. Ryan is one of my best friends. We started out together, and we've been in touch ever since elementary school. We even had some of the same teachers. I noticed that he was interested in the medical field, and his father is actually a doctor.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Well uh. There are a lot of people in our surrounding home we like or dislike. Uh, some of them are good and some are bad as a social being we have to face many people every day they has a uh. Range of positive and negative role in our life being a ah. People person I know many people who have chosen different career in order to make their life better but here today I am going to talk about a person who choose a career in the medical field the person I am talking about he is none other than Mister Rya Jodin actually Ryaj is one of the um. My best friends he started with me we both uh. In, we both in. We have been in touch with um. We have been in touch with each other since it standard we both had the same teach classes but I saw he is interested in the medical field actually his father is mhm. A dance.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 3

some: 3

lives: 2

person: 2

medical: 2

field: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

4.5

The answer is a bit disjointed and lacks focus. The student starts by talking about people in general, then mentions choosing careers, and finally gets to the specific person. The answer could be improved by directly addressing the topic from the beginning and providing more details about Ryan's career choice and his motivations. For example, the student could mention what specific medical field Ryan is interested in, what he does in his job, and how he feels about his career. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is not very fluent and lacks coherence. The student uses a lot of fillers like "uh" and "um" and repeats phrases like "we both." The answer also jumps around between different ideas, making it difficult to follow. The student could improve fluency by practicing speaking more naturally and using fewer fillers. They could also improve coherence by organizing their thoughts more logically and using transition words to connect their ideas.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a limited range of vocabulary and some of the words are not used accurately. For example, the student uses "range of positive and negative role" instead of "positive and negative impact." The student could improve their lexical resource by reading more and expanding their vocabulary. They could also pay attention to the nuances of word choice and use more precise language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student makes several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses and subject-verb agreement. For example, the student says "they has a uh" instead of "they have a." The student could improve their grammatical accuracy by reviewing grammar rules and practicing using different grammatical structures.

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