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Band 6+: Describe a person who likes to look after the natural world You should say: - Who this person is - What he or she does - How he or she does it - How often he or she does it - And explain how you feel about this person

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Today I'm going to talk about my friend, Baba, who has a passion for the natural world. To give some background, I was petrified when I was 3 to 5 years old because my parents were taking me to a new place. Before I had many chances to find him free and go to his garden. As for his appearance, he has some wrinkles on his face. Because we all became exposed to sunlight in the garden. When I lived with him, I usually saw him watering the trees and adding flowers in the garden. What I admire most is that he developed this passion for the environment long before it became popular. I heard from people that he has entered an incredible part of human life, where you can be in love with nature. Normally, people can be close to each other, but also find a sense of reality in nature. Baba's dedication to the natural world inspires me and makes me appreciate the environment more.

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Today I’m going to talk about my friend, Baba, who has a passion for the afterworld. To get to some background, I was petrified when I was from 3 to 5 years old because my parents were giving me to take me at a time. Before I had many chances to find him free and go towards his garden as for his appearance, who has some records on her face on her face. Because, um, I was, we all became exposure to sunlight in the garden. I mean, when I lived with him, I usually saw him fountain the trees and add the flowers in the garden. And what I admire most is that people develop this app as long before the environment is successful. And you watch the show in Vietnam. I heard the app heard from people that you have entered in an incredible part of human life, when you are in love with that, normally can be close to each other, but also find a sense of the reality.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

garden: 3

passion: 2

natural: 2

world: 2

because: 2

before: 2

became: 2

environment: 2

people: 2

nature: 2

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Task Response

The response addresses the topic and provides relevant information about the person who likes to look after the natural world. The answer includes details about who the person is, what he does, and how he does it. To improve, consider adding more specific details about how often he engages in these activities and elaborating on your feelings about this person and their impact.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are moments of disjointedness and tangents that detract from the overall flow. The introduction of being 'petrified' as a child feels out of place. The connection between the friend and the speaker's childhood is not clearly established. The ending feels abrupt and doesn't fully tie back to the description of the friend. To improve, focus on maintaining a clear and logical progression of ideas, and ensure each point directly relates to the topic. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. Words like 'passion,' 'admire,' and 'incredible' are used, but the range could be expanded to provide a more vivid and detailed description. There are instances of inaccurate word choice ('the afterworld' instead of 'the natural world,' 'fountain the trees' instead of 'watering the trees'). To improve, focus on learning and using more specific and descriptive vocabulary related to nature and environmental care. Pay attention to collocations and word usage to avoid inaccuracies.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The answer contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include incorrect verb tenses ('I was petrified when I was from 3 to 5 years old'), awkward phrasing ('giving me to take me at a time'), and errors in preposition usage ('exposure to sunlight in the garden'). To improve, focus on practicing and refining grammatical accuracy, particularly in areas such as verb tenses, sentence structure, and preposition usage. Review and correct common errors to enhance clarity and precision.

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