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Band 7+: Describe a person who makes plans a lot and is good at planning

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Well, I would like to describe my brother Odl, who is excellent at planning and makes plans very often. He is 21 years old and currently studying at a university. He really enjoys organizing events and managing tasks efficiently. For instance, last week my best friend Nader was struggling to prepare his mother's birthday party, and my brother created a detailed plan. He suggested sprinkling rose petals and arranging colorful balloons. Nader followed my brother's plan, and the party turned out to be extremely happy and memorable. This clearly shows how good my brother is at planning.

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Well, I would like to describe my brother Odl, who is excellent at planning and makes plans very often. He is 21 years old and currently studying at a university. He really enjoys organizing events and managing tasks efficiently. For instance, last week my best friend Nader was struggling to prepare his mother’s birthday party and my brother created a detailed plan. He suggested sprinkling rose petals and arranging colorful balloons. Nader followed my brother’s plan and the party turned out to be extremely happy and more able. This clearly shows how good my browser is at planning.

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brother: 3

planning: 2

nader: 2

party: 2

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Task Response

The response addresses the topic and provides a relevant example. To further enhance the answer, consider elaborating on the brother's planning process and the specific strategies he employs. Adding more details about his organizational skills and how they contribute to successful outcomes would strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

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Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and relevant to the topic. Words like 'efficiently,' 'detailed plan,' 'sprinkling,' and 'arranging' are appropriate. However, the range could be expanded to demonstrate a greater command of the English language. Consider using synonyms or more descriptive words to add depth to the response. For example, instead of 'extremely happy,' you could say 'incredibly joyous' or 'unforgettably delightful'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical accuracy is generally good, with only minor errors. The sentence structures are varied and appropriate. However, there's a minor error: 'more able' should be 'memorable'. Pay attention to word choice and ensure it accurately reflects the intended meaning. Continue practicing to refine accuracy and expand the range of grammatical structures used.

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