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Band 5+: Describe a person you know who chose career in medical Field

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Today I have decided to talk about a friend of mine named Jessica, who is an exceptional dentist. I've known Jessica for 20 years. We first met in high school and quickly became close friends due to our shared interests. She is a versatile individual with a range of talents. She is extremely extroverted and outgoing, but also very focused. She has achieved enormous success through her dedication and hard work. There are so many reasons why she chose a career in medicine. She believes that doctors become not only healers, but also work for humanity. She also believes that doctors are entrusted with the tasks of saving lives and other important things. On top of that, she sees medicine as not just a career, but also a calling, a way to make a real difference in the world.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

also: 4

that: 3

jessica: 2

career: 2

medicine: 2

believes: 2

doctors: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The student provides a good description of Jessica and her personality, but the explanation of her reasons for choosing medicine is a bit vague. More specific examples of her motivations would be helpful. For example, did she have a personal experience that inspired her? Did she volunteer in a hospital? The student also mentions that Jessica is a dentist, but then talks about doctors in general. It would be better to focus on Jessica's specific career choice. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The student's speech is quite hesitant and disjointed, with many fillers and repetitions. The organization of the answer is also a bit unclear. The student jumps around between different points without a clear structure. The student could improve fluency by practicing speaking more naturally and using pauses effectively. They could also improve coherence by using more transition words and phrases to connect their ideas.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some errors in word choice and collocations. For example, "versat individual" should be "versatile individual" and "outoo" should be "outgoing." The student also uses some informal language, such as "closeoss friends" and "good job discovery." It would be better to use more formal language in an IELTS speaking test.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student makes several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. For example, "She is an exceptional who hasieved enorous success" should be "She is an exceptional person who has achieved enormous success." The student also uses some awkward sentence structures. The student could improve their grammatical accuracy by reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing writing and speaking more often.

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