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Band 7+: describe a person you know who has chosen a career in the medical field

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The person I know who is already in the medical field is my older brother Sumid. He is a resident doctor in a government hospital in my city. He studied for a bachelor's in medicine, and after finishing his graduation, he decided to study for a master's in anesthesia. Today, he works more than eight to ten hours to serve people. He has been in this field for more than ten years now. He is such a great anesthesiologist. During surgeries, he has to cooperate with other doctors, and the level of knowledge he possesses is very impressive. He chose to study medicine because he wanted to help others and serve society. Therefore, he decided to study medicine. Interestingly, when I need his help with my studies, he always tries to assist me. He acts as a backbone for me, and he is my support to achieve my goals in the future. In my eyes, my older brother is a role model.
Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

The person I know who is already in medical field is my older brother Sumid. He is a resident doctor in government hospital in my city. He studied bachelor’s in medicine and after finishing his graduation he decided to study masters in anesthesia. Today he is working more than eight to 10 hours to serve people. People and uh he is in this field for more than ten years now. So he is s such a great anesthesiologist uh, during surgeries he has to be cooperated with other doctors and the uH, level of knowledge and in instance he know is very grateful. He choose to study medicine because he wanted to help other people. He wanted to serve the society. Uh therefore he decided to study medicine and interestingly when I need him his help in study he will always try to help me. He act as backne for me and he is my backup support to achieve my goals in future. Two uh, in my eyes my older brother is role model.

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Overall Band Score

7
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Vocabulary Repetition:
medicine: 3
study: 3
field: 2
older: 2
brother: 2
decided: 2
serve: 2
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Pronunciation

7
Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

8
The answer is well-organized and coherent, providing sufficient detail about the chosen person and their medical career. Consider expanding on specific instances where your brother's medical expertise and dedication were demonstrated. Adding a brief anecdote illustrating a challenging situation he handled successfully would further enhance the response.

Fluency & Coherence

7
The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There are a few instances of hesitation ('uh'), but these do not significantly impede understanding. Improving the flow by reducing hesitations and using more sophisticated linking words would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

7
The vocabulary used is adequate and appropriate for the topic. Words like 'anesthesiologist' and 'cooperate' demonstrate a good range. However, using more precise and sophisticated vocabulary would elevate the response. For example, instead of 'he is such a great anesthesiologist,' you could say 'he is a highly skilled anesthesiologist' or 'he is an exceptionally competent anesthesiologist'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6
While the grammar is mostly correct, there are a few minor errors ('in medical field' should be 'in the medical field', 'master's' should be 'a master's'). The sentence structure is sometimes simple. Using more complex grammatical structures, such as passive voice or embedded clauses, would improve grammatical range and accuracy.

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