Band 4+: Describe a skill that you learned in your childhood.

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Your answer addresses the topic by describing a skill learned in childhood, but it lacks depth and specific details. To improve, you should elaborate on the learning process, the challenges you faced, and how this skill has impacted your life. Including personal experiences and concrete examples will make your response more engaging and fully developed. Additionally, ensure that all parts of the topic are covered, such as who taught you, when exactly in childhood, and why it was important to you. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer has a basic structure but lacks clear organization and development. There is noticeable repetition and self-correction (e.g., 'I've I I become', 'and and it also It it it gives'). The response is short and does not fully address the topic with detailed examples or a clear progression. To improve, use cohesive devices to link ideas, expand on the skill with specific details (e.g., how you learned, challenges, benefits), and avoid unnecessary repetition.

The vocabulary is adequate for the topic, with some good phrases like 'technical era', 'demanding in every social media app', and 'got cold feet'. However, there is limited range and precision. The answer relies on simple vocabulary and lacks more specific or varied terms. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'acquired', 'proficient', 'editing software', 'career prospects') and avoid vague expressions like 'so many years'.

There are several grammatical errors and awkward structures, such as 'It is recommended by my friend' (should be 'It was recommended'), 'I do regular basis' (should be 'I did it on a regular basis'), and 'it gives the so many years' (incomplete and unclear). The answer uses a limited range of sentence structures, mostly simple sentences. To improve, practice using a variety of tenses and complex sentences, and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct word order.