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Band 5+: Describe a small but positive change you made in your life recently. You should say: - What the change was - When you made the change - What motivated you to make the change And explain how this change has affected your life.

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Well, I want to talk about a positive change in my life. That change is a feeling. That feeling is that I can do everything. I am the best person. I have rich knowledge, and I am the best. I think this feeling is important. When I followed the test, it showed me I am the best. It's a small test, but it is a significant decision in my life. I changed my mindset. After that, I felt so much better than before because this feeling encourages me to go on, and I have a lot of energy to correct my mistakes. I think this feeling is very beneficial for me. After a long time, I feel excited about my progress. So, I want to say that to be a better person, you must have confidence, I think. Yeah.

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Well, I want to talk about the positive change, change my life. That is a feeling. That feeling is I can do everything. I am the best person. I have I have I have rich knowledge I am the best. The feeling I think. And when I when I followed the test I chugged me I am the best it’s it’s it’s okay it is a small test is don’t significantly significantly decision in your life I chugged I chugged mine. And after Zen, I feeling so better than before because the feeling is encouraging me go on and I have a lot of energy to change my mistakes. So, I think the feeling is so better and very useful for me. After a long time, I feel so excited after that. So I want to say to be a person forced you must be a confidence I think. Yeah.

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that: 5

feeling: 5

best: 3

have: 3

think: 3

this: 3

about: 2

change: 2

person: 2

after: 2

better: 2

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The answer contains noticeable hesitation and repetition ('I have I have I have', 'when I when I'). The organization of ideas is somewhat unclear, making it difficult to follow the narrative smoothly. To improve, practice speaking more continuously and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'therefore,' 'however,' 'in addition') to link ideas more effectively. Focus on structuring your response with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

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Band 5+: Describe a small but positive change you made in your life recently. You should say: - What the change was - When you made the change - What motivated you to make the change And explain how this change has affected your life.

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