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Band 6+: Describe a time when you felt proud of a family member

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Let me get this ball rolling. The situation when I felt proud of my sister happened last year. The reason I felt proud was that my sister Milana was invited as a dance teacher at the dance studio. It was really impressive as she had been working really hard by that time. She did a lot of dance exercises, attended dance classes, organized contests, and took part in competitions. So I think she was really... She was a really good person for this work. These things demonstrated her long-term efforts, and it makes me really proud of her. Thank you for watching.

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Let me get this ball rolling. The situation when I felt proud of my sister happened last year. The reason I felt proud was that my sister Milana is invited as a dance teacher in the dance studio. It was really impressive as she She had been working really hard by this time. She did a lot of dancing exercises, went to the dance classes, organized contests, took part in the competitions. So I think she was really… She was a really good people for this work. These things demonstrated your long term efforts and it makes me really proud of your Thank you for watching.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

really: 5

dance: 4

proud: 3

sister: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the prompt by describing a time the speaker felt proud of their sister. To improve, consider adding more specific details about the event and elaborating on the impact it had on you and your family. Providing a more detailed narrative and exploring your emotions more deeply would enhance the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent, but there are some hesitations and self-corrections ('She was really... She was a really good people'). The structure is present, but could be improved with more cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly. Try to minimize pauses and repetitions by practicing speaking more continuously on a variety of topics.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly varied or precise. Phrases like 'really good people' are not the most accurate. To improve, focus on learning synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to the topics you are likely to discuss. For example, instead of 'really good,' consider using 'highly qualified' or 'well-suited.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'She was a really good people' (should be 'person'). The range of structures is somewhat limited. To improve, focus on practicing a wider range of grammatical structures and reviewing basic grammar rules. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles.

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