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Band 6+: Describe an advertisement that persuaded you to buy a product. You should say: What advertisement it was Was it shown on TV, radio or newspaper What was good about that advertisement Explain why you think that advertisement made the product seem attractive.

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Recently, I was looking for pants and then I saw an advertisement for jeans. I saw this on TikTok. This advertisement was effective because it showcased the product, and there was a girl who had the same height as me. She tried the product on and explained the material and the design, giving a positive review of the product. For me, as someone who was looking for those pants, it made me immediately want to buy those jeans.

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So recently I was looking for a pants and then I saw an advertisement of jeans. I saw this on TikTok. so this advertisement is good because it shows the product and then there was a girl who has the same hate as me and then she tried the product on and then She also explained the material, the design and then give a positive review of the product. So for me who was looking for that pants it makes me immediately buy that jeans.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

product: 3

looking: 2

pants: 2

advertisement: 2

jeans: 2

those: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the prompt by describing an advertisement that led to a purchase. It identifies the advertisement, where it was seen, and what made it effective. To further enhance the response, consider elaborating on the specific aspects of the advertisement that made the product seem attractive, providing more detailed explanations. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent and follows a logical structure, addressing all parts of the prompt. However, there are some pauses and hesitations that slightly affect the fluency. To improve, try to use more linking words and phrases to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying 'So recently,' you could say 'Recently, I...' or 'Just recently, I...'. Also, practice speaking more continuously without relying too much on 'and then'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. For instance, instead of just saying 'good,' you could use more descriptive words like 'effective,' 'appealing,' or 'persuasive.' Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition, such as 'demonstrated' instead of 'shows.' Expanding your vocabulary range will make your answer more engaging and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors that could be improved. For example, 'who has the same hate as me' should be 'who has the same height as me'. Also, 'it makes me immediately buy that jeans' could be phrased as 'it made me immediately want to buy those jeans'. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of prepositions. Reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction will help improve accuracy.

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Band 6+: Describe an advertisement that persuaded you to buy a product. You should say: What advertisement it was Was it shown on TV, radio or newspaper What was good about that advertisement Explain why you think that advertisement made the product seem attractive.

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Describe an advertisement that persuaded you to buy a product. You should say: What advertisement it was Was it shown on TV, radio or newspaper What was good about that advertisement Explain why you think that advertisement made the product seem attractive.

Describe an advertisement that persuaded you to buy a product. You should say: What advertisement it was Was it shown on TV, radio or newspaper What was good about that advertisement Explain why you think that advertisement made the product seem attractive.

Describe an advertisement that persuaded you to buy a product. You should say: What advertisement it was Was it shown on TV, radio or newspaper What was good about that advertisement Explain why you think that advertisement made the product seem attractive.

Describe an advertisement that persuaded you to buy a product. You should say: What advertisement it was Was it shown on TV, radio or newspaper What was good about that advertisement Explain why you think that advertisement made the product seem attractive.

Describe an advertisement that persuaded you to buy a product. You should say: What advertisement it was Was it shown on TV, radio or newspaper What was good about that advertisement Explain why you think that advertisement made the product seem attractive.

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