Band 6+: describe one of your family members you spend the most time with

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is quite brief and could benefit from more detailed descriptions and examples. Consider expanding on specific instances where your brother gave you advice and the impact it had. Adding more descriptive language to paint a clearer picture of your relationship would also improve the response.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. There is some minor repetition and slightly unnatural phrasing ("He usually spent most time together"). Improving fluency would involve more natural sentence structures and smoother transitions. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more effectively.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the speaker uses words like "well-educated," more precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. Try to incorporate more descriptive adjectives and avoid simple repetitions of positive terms like "good man" and "good person".

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors ("which I spent the most time with his name was", "for how you will become"). The speaker demonstrates some grammatical range, but more complex sentence structures and accurate use of tenses would improve the score. Focus on improving subject-verb agreement and prepositional phrases.