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Band 5+: Describe the person who contributes to the society.

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I think the person is Zhong Nanshan. I learned about him in 2020. That year, there was a big pandemic in China. Many people didn't understand the harm of it. Some thought it was similar to the pandemic in 2020, but it was more harmful and stronger than that. No one knew how to handle it. Zhong Nanshan is very old, yet he went to Wuhan and worked in a very dangerous environment. I believe he contributes to society because he was the first person to discuss the treatment of the pandemic and

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I think the person is Zhong Nanshan. I know him in the 2020. This year, there have been a big pandemic in China. Many people don’t know the harmful of this. Some people think it’s similar to the pandemic in the 2020. But it’s more harmful and stronger than this. But no one knows how to harness it. And Zhong Nanshan is very old also. But he also went to Wuhan and worked in a very dangerous environment. I think he contributes to the society because he is the first person who talks on treatment of the pandemic and

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

pandemic: 3

person: 2

zhong: 2

nanshan: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

5.5

The answer is a good start, mentioning a relevant person and the context of their contribution. However, it lacks detail and depth in explaining the contribution. To improve, expand on the specific actions Zhong Nanshan took, the impact of those actions, and provide more specific examples to illustrate his contribution to society. Consider adding details about his research, his public pronouncements, or the influence he had on policy decisions. Concluding the answer would also strengthen it. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent, but the fluency could be improved. There are some hesitations and repetitions. Try to speak more smoothly and confidently, pausing only for emphasis or to structure your thoughts. Practicing speaking about this topic more will help.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the speaker uses words like "pandemic" and "harmful," more precise and varied vocabulary would elevate the response. Consider using synonyms and more descriptive language to enrich your vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors, particularly with tense consistency and article usage. For example, "I know him in 2020" should be "I learned about him in 2020." Focus on improving accuracy in simple past and present perfect tenses. Pay attention to using articles (a, an, the) correctly.

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