Band 5+: Describe the time when you shared a secret with another person. Why did you think this person was reliable enough to tell your secret? Can people who trust others too much get hurt?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer addresses the topic but lacks depth and specific details. It briefly mentions sharing a secret with a close friend but does not elaborate on the secret itself, the context, or the emotional significance. The response to the reliability question is generic and could be more personalized. The final question is answered with a simple agreement and a general statement, without providing examples or reasoning. To improve, expand on the story with concrete details, explain why the friend was reliable with specific examples, and discuss the potential risks of trusting too much with more nuance and personal reflection. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is somewhat coherent but lacks organization and development. The response to the first part is brief and lacks detail. The transition to the second question is abrupt ('Yes, absolutely'), and the final part is incomplete and confusing. To improve, structure the answer with clear paragraphs for each part of the question, use cohesive devices to link ideas, and expand on your points with examples or reasons.

The vocabulary is adequate but limited. There is an attempt to use appropriate words like 'reliable', 'supportive', and 'keeping secrets', but there are errors such as 'truthy' (instead of 'truthful') and 'emotion pain' (instead of 'emotional pain'). The phrase 'better Now that truth is always wise' is unclear. To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary and ensure correct word forms and collocations.

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'I need someone' should be 'I needed someone' (past tense consistency). 'If the other person better' is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Confit in' is a misspelling of 'confide in'. The answer lacks complex structures and shows limited range. To improve, practice using past tenses consistently, form complete sentences, and incorporate a variety of sentence structures (e.g., conditionals, relative clauses).