Band 5+: Did you like to talk to others when you were a child?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is understandable, but it does not directly address the question. Consider focusing more directly on your own childhood experiences and less on your friend. Elaborating on why you were less talkative as a child would strengthen your answer.

The answer is understandable, but the phrasing is slightly unnatural. The structure could be improved for better flow. For example, instead of 'I asked Lee to be a less talkative person,' consider 'I wished Lee were less talkative.'

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'talkative' are good choices, but more precise language could elevate the response. Consider using synonyms to show range.

There are grammatical errors, such as 'talk less person' and the slightly awkward phrasing of the final sentence. While the meaning is clear, more accurate and varied grammatical structures would improve the score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct use of verb tenses.