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Band 6+: Do people become famous because of their talent?

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Well, I think having good talent is very important to become famous. For example, people with a good voice can sing very well. For instance, Jay Chou, a very famous singer in China, has talent in singing and he has many popular songs in China. In another way, for performers, some people can act very well. For example, Jackie Chan, who has acted in many movies, can make a lot of money. Of course, they have good talent, but they also need to work hard.

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Well, I think people have a good talent is very important to become famous. For example, people have a good voice that they can sing very well. They can sing very well. For example, Jay Chou, a very famous singer in China, He has a talented in singing and he sings many songs and be hot in China. In another way, you know, for performers that some people can act very well. For example, Jackie Chan, he acts many movies and he can make a lot of money. Of course, they have good talent, but they also need to work hard.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

very: 4

well: 3

good: 3

talent: 3

famous: 2

example: 2

people: 2

china: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant examples to support the points made. To further enhance the response, consider exploring additional factors beyond talent that contribute to fame, such as marketing, networking, or luck. Additionally, try to avoid using the same sentence structure repeatedly.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent, but there are some instances of repetition ('They can sing very well') and hesitation ('you know') that affect the flow. Using a wider range of cohesive devices would improve the structure. For example, instead of saying 'In another way,' you could use phrases like 'Furthermore' or 'Additionally' to introduce the second example.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The candidate uses simple words and phrases. To improve, try to use more specific and descriptive vocabulary related to talent and fame. For example, instead of 'be hot,' use 'become popular' or 'achieve widespread recognition.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors, such as 'people have a good talent' (should be 'people who have good talent' or 'people with good talent') and 'He has a talented in singing' (should be 'He has talent in singing'). Expanding the range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy would improve the score. For example, using more complex sentence structures and relative clauses.

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