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Band 6+: Do people become famous because of their talent?

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Of course, there is a program in China called the Zuiqiang Danou, which showcases many talents from Thailand in different fields. This is a very famous program because ordinary people can easily showcase their talents, which can help Thailand become more famous. They may contribute to China and enter the top program, CCTV, which will become the most famous in China.

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Of course, there is a program in China called the Zuiqiang Danou, which shows a many of Thailand in different fields. This is a very famous program because our normal people can easily show that Thailand, maybe you can, which can help that Thailand become more famous, maybe they can contribute some contribution to the China and go into the top program, CCTV, which will become the most famous in China.

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program: 3

china: 3

which: 3

famous: 3

talents: 2

thailand: 2

become: 2

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Task Response

The response is somewhat relevant to the question but lacks depth and clarity. The example provided is not clearly linked to the broader concept of talent leading to fame. To improve, focus on providing more direct and general explanations, and ensure examples are clearly relevant and well-explained.

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The answer is somewhat coherent but contains some hesitations and reformulations. The ideas are connected, but the flow could be smoother. Try to organize your thoughts more clearly before speaking to improve coherence. Using discourse markers more effectively could also help.

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The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly precise or varied. The phrase "show that Thailand" is unclear and seems to be a misstatement. Aim to use more specific and nuanced vocabulary to express your ideas more accurately. For example, instead of repeating "famous," try using synonyms like "renowned" or "well-known."

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The grammar is generally understandable, but there are some errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "shows a many of Thailand" is grammatically incorrect. The sentence structure is relatively simple. Work on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in your sentence construction. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles.

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