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Band 6+: Do people feel lonely in crowded cities

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Yes, people can feel lonely in crowded cities because the people around them may not be familiar. This can make it feel hesitant or shy to be a part of the community. They might not feel comfortable engaging in activities around the city, fearing judgment or ridicule. This can lead to social isolation and a sense of being left out.

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Yes. Lonely in crowd cities because the people around them, um, not be, uh, may not be knowing to them. So it feels so hesitant or shy to be a part of that. So, uh. So they won’t be, uh, much involved in the activities around the cities or they are very much af. However uh, the people will blame them or tease them. Uh, so that makes them, uh, keeping backward.

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