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Band 7+: Do people feel lonely in crowded cities

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I think it totally depends on the person and their personality. For an introvert, it can be difficult to connect with others, while an ambivert or extrovert might find it easier. However, sometimes I think people in crowded cities can feel lonely. Everyone is so busy with their work that they may not have time to spend with family or friends. This can lead to a sense of isolation, even in a bustling environment.

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I think it totally depends on a person and his personality. Because for an introvert, it’s difficult to mix with other people. While an ambat or extrovert person. Easily mix with other people. But, uh, sometimes I think, uh, in crowded cities, people feel lonely. Because everyone in there is very busy with their work. So that they cannot spend, um, time with their family members or other people.

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer directly addresses the question and provides a good explanation of how crowded cities can lead to loneliness. However, the answer could be more nuanced by exploring other factors that contribute to loneliness in cities, such as the transient nature of urban life and the lack of community.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally well-organized and coherent. The student uses appropriate cohesive devices, such as 'however' and 'because,' to connect their ideas. There are a few instances of hesitation and repetition, but these do not significantly detract from the overall fluency.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a good range of vocabulary, including words like 'introvert,' 'ambivert,' and 'isolation.' However, there are some instances of less precise language, such as 'mix with other people' and 'spend time with their family members.' The student could benefit from using more specific and sophisticated vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student demonstrates a good command of grammar, with only a few minor errors. For example, the sentence 'While an ambat or extrovert person. Easily mix with other people' is grammatically incorrect. The student could also benefit from using more complex sentence structures to add variety and sophistication to their language.

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